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The Thing They Call Love by ~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate:





You can dull all the symptoms
But you can't cure the ills
Because it's beaten, broken
And corrupted your will

It spats in your face
But you want it still

So this is the thing they call love

A man meets a woman
And then their bodies gel
They've nothing in common
But they marry as well

And it's not very far
From Heaven to Hell

So this is the thing they call love

Now she prays every night
That she won't wake beside him
And he wonders what she shows
To eyes that aren't his

They'll be bitter and quarrel
For as long as they live

So this is the thing they call love

"For better or worse";
A continuing curse...
"In sickness and health";
You'll just get the first...

"Till death do you part";
Life is not short enough...

So this is the thing they call love

There's a bottomless feeling
That sobriety brings
So they abandoned their vows
And they discard their rings

The sweetness of the start
Leaves a sour ending

So this is the thing they call love

There's some things you lose
You won't ever recover
With another day, another dollar
Another heart, another lover

But the memories remain
Of those you'll never get over

So this is the thing they call love

You can dull all the symptoms
But you can't cure the ills
Because it's beaten, broken
And corrupted your will

It spats in your face
But you want it still

So this is the thing they call love
©2009 ~Viva-Hate
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:iconaelitakel:
Kinda harsh? But true...

Like the heaven and hell bit :)

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I feel extremes of love and hate...it's in between where I freeze...so I only have a few gears I can shift to, emotionally. Lol.

Thank you very much for the praise and favorite ;)

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:iconaelitakel:
I like that metaphor :)

Ur welcome :)

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:iconfranklindsmith:
Guess they don't call you viva hate for nothin :P Just kiddin though, the poem was extremely expressive an deep almost like a song.

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Well, I DO have a softer side...after all, my ultimate goal in life is to be one of the people in the pool during the "Don't Dream It, Be It" scene in the "Rocky Horror Picture Show"...:|

But thank you very much...everything I have ever written is written with the intent of being a song...that is why I often include choruses and breaks...

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I may just have to use that one on a submission now...

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How do you start?
Where do you go?
Who do you need to know?
:iconaelitakel:
:)

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:iconfranklindsmith:
Hmm very very nice. Doubt i could do that lol. All my stuff just ummm yeah lol. Guess thats why i hate most of'm (shrugs)

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:iconviva-hate:
Thanks.

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