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All Deviations




This day has lasted longer
Than a day was ever meant to

So many things done and said
That we never will undo
But in the end, I don't think
Given the chance we'd even want to

Let me steal your gaze away
One more time before you leave

There must be something I can say
To make your eyes stray from your feet
To silence this nervous idle chatter
To make yours and my lips meet

As I lean in for a kiss
My confidence is strong
For once the girl is right
And tonight the time's not wrong

But your father flipped the porch light
That shun a light down on my flaws
And all at once all I've won in a moment has been lost
©2008 ~Viva-Hate
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So much can happen in a moment...all could be won or damage can be done.

This was originally part of a different (yet to be submitted) piece titled "Everyday And Evermore"...but I changed the structure of that and realized this didn't fit with the story of it anymore...

For better or worse, I've at least written something...
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~capsize-beautiful:iconcapsize-beautiful: Apr 11, 2008, 12:01:29 AM
bipolar bloody moments.

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it feels like independence day, but i can't get away from this parade..
~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate: Apr 11, 2008, 1:32:44 AM
What exactly does that have anything to do with this piece?

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All my powers of expression
And thoughts so sublime
Could never do you justice
In reason or rhyme

*Writers-Club
~capsize-beautiful:iconcapsize-beautiful: Apr 11, 2008, 8:28:34 AM
moments. they shift annoyingly fast. from perfect, to, you know, porch-lighty.

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it feels like independence day, but i can't get away from this parade..
~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate: Apr 11, 2008, 8:43:31 AM
And I was supposed to "get that" from your comment?

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All my powers of expression
And thoughts so sublime
Could never do you justice
In reason or rhyme

*Writers-Club
~capsize-beautiful:iconcapsize-beautiful: Apr 11, 2008, 3:53:42 PM
well yeah.. *rolls eyes*

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it feels like independence day, but i can't get away from this parade..
~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate: Apr 11, 2008, 4:12:43 PM
Too bad, you fail. LOSER!

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All my powers of expression
And thoughts so sublime
Could never do you justice
In reason or rhyme

*Writers-Club
~capsize-beautiful:iconcapsize-beautiful: Apr 11, 2008, 4:26:12 PM
nuh uh, i'm a WINNAH. :noes:

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it feels like independence day, but i can't get away from this parade..
~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate: Apr 11, 2008, 5:48:40 PM
Yeah, you've got the Gold Medal in Loserdom...

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All my powers of expression
And thoughts so sublime
Could never do you justice
In reason or rhyme

*Writers-Club
~capsize-beautiful:iconcapsize-beautiful: Apr 11, 2008, 6:05:22 PM
..loserdom is a very respectable art. it takes skill, finesse, passion.

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it feels like independence day, but i can't get away from this parade..