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Dinner At 8, Disaster For 2 by ~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate:



Lipstick stains the coffee cup
From which you sipped as you supped
The very last ounce of patience I could muster up

In your wake an aftertaste was brought
Cue after-dinner mints and an afterthought
I'm only feeling aftershocks 'cause you're a cause that's lost

Cigarettes that are barely left
Got more love from you than I could get
How can I live in my own home yet feel like a guest?

Utter something other than utter trash
Stutter something without a ca, ca, ca, catch
Just give in to me and admit you've met your match

So open wide
And remember to chew
Or else you might swallow your pride
And choking isn't a good look for you

You have a choice to make; Go ahead and choose
If you're prepared to leave then be aware
You're never there and I hardly care
Because I'm fully qualified to live my life without you
©2008 ~Viva-Hate
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This is a little different from how I normally write...
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~ElfMuse:iconElfMuse: Feb 18, 2008, 2:14:23 PM
I must say:"I like it allot :)"
Great work :D

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~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate: Feb 18, 2008, 2:16:20 PM
Thank you verry much. :D Lol.

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~capsize-beautiful:iconcapsize-beautiful: Feb 18, 2008, 3:38:15 PM
reading your stuff always makes me feel like a scandalous, evil, heartless scheming woman for some reason. it's kind of delightful.
now stop mucking up my brain!

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~capsize-beautiful:iconcapsize-beautiful: Feb 18, 2008, 3:38:56 PM
hah.
you're so full of subtle cruelty. =P

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~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate: Feb 19, 2008, 2:47:49 AM
Probably because that is what all women are at heart? Lol.

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~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate: Feb 19, 2008, 2:48:33 AM
I'm glad someone noticed that...:D

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~capsize-beautiful:iconcapsize-beautiful: Feb 19, 2008, 9:30:55 AM
aww...
that was a low blow. :(

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~capsize-beautiful:iconcapsize-beautiful: Feb 19, 2008, 9:31:39 AM
it's a good thing i'm around, or all your clever little insults would go unnoticed.

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~Viva-Hate:iconViva-Hate: Feb 19, 2008, 1:49:54 PM
I would know they are there...and knowing no one else gets it furthers my claim of genius...

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