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Jack The Ripper

Far from Heaven, far from home Standing alone on a cobblestone road Intently placed footsteps echo the purpose Hidden under a tailored surface
Disciplined days fade to manic nights Moonlight parts the sky and blinds Eyes that put a price on pleasure Happiness given in half-measure
Following brass towards the fog Careening headlong into harm Out of mind, now out of sight Charming facade reveals a knife
Plunged inside, gasping for breath The customer tonight answers to Death Carving fast and leaving quicker Another notch for Jack The R

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Just A PhaseYou walk into the room They whisper in your ear Words leech on your defenses Hands play upon your fears
With your heart in your pocket
And your desire on your sleeve Even a fool whose blind could clearly see What you think of when you're alone
You've started to change And it cannot be reversed They say it's a phase But you are getting worse
You're tired, tremulous Tenacious and tense You try to find reason But in reason you can't find sense
You try to fight but you are much too weak You trip on your tongue before Just A Phase
by ~Viva-Hate

No Room For OscarWrap your arms around my head Hear my voice, don't stray from bed Face to face and eye to eye Let's lay here forever, you and I
I softly fret as I'm left alone You can't stay late, your father is home Engaged in an impulsive tug of war To win or lose - not sure of which I want more
I throw myself in poems and prose My flesh is paper, the ink my blood But in the absence of a touch Time grinds wills, turns senses numb
Lust is lust - it's all the same As for the love that dare not speak it's name What some call 'gross indecency' Is an a No Room For Oscar
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LovestruckI'm lovestruck And with my luck That is a bad thing
This sensation is fulfilling As if my heart is about to burst I would have fallen for you If you hadn't tripped me first
Loneliness is dead But as I've always said "In every romance, lies a heartache"
Time can turn a passion numb If I should lose the will to go on Would you still love me enough To give me some of yours?
There is nothing I can do I am depending on you To be the compass to my heart's desires
Though the deck is stacked I believe you can Lovestruck
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Whats The Use?If I seem over the hill It's just because I've given up On Cupid's touch
Or Lady Luck And words don't hold
Quite the weight they used to I have my youth...but what's the use?
And I've come to learn I'm not part of the master plan
To love and to live; I won't or I can't And the tears don't fall Quite as much as they used to
I have my youth...but what's the use?
So many things mean so little now So many things I have gone without And all of the things people write about I can live without anyhow
And if I seem over Whats The Use?
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Sat Nov 21, 2009, 1:38 AM

Shadows are falling and I've been here all day
It's too hot to sleep and time is running away
Feel like my soul has turned into steel
I've still got the scars that the sun didn't heal
There's not even room enough to be anywhere
It's not dark yet, but it's getting there

Well my sense of humanity has gone down the drain
Behind every beautiful thing there's been some kind of pain
She wrote me a letter and she wrote it so kind
She put down in writing what was in her mind
I just don't see why I should even care
It's not dark yet, but it's getting there

Well, I've been to London and I've been to gay Paree
I've followed the river and I got to the sea
I've been down on the bottom of a world full of lies
I ain't looking for nothing in anyone's eyes
Sometimes my burden seems more than I can bear
It's not dark yet, but it's getting there

I was born here and I'll die here against my will
I know it looks like I'm moving, but I'm standing still
Every nerve in my body is so vacant and numb
I can't even remember what it was I came here to get away from
Don't even hear a murmur of a prayer
It's not dark yet, but it's getting there

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*versebyverse Jun 4, 2009, 10:41:52 PM

Hi!

You are now an official member of this poetry community, congratulations! I hope to see you try the bref double this month. Please put us in your journal if possible so others can find us to join. Good to have you.

Pamela
~pamelaski

~Viva-Hate Jun 5, 2009, 4:21:15 PM

Does this club watch their members? Or read their work?

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When you want to live:
How do you start?
Where do you go?
Who do you need to know?

*versebyverse Jun 5, 2009, 6:29:41 PM

We read what is submitted to us for general submissions, and challenges. We also read everyone's challenge piece in order to vote for "best of form" at the end of the month.

~Viva-Hate Jun 6, 2009, 3:24:24 AM

I was actually meaning things that weren't submitted to the group...for example, does the club go around to random member's profiles and read their work...

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When you want to live:
How do you start?
Where do you go?
Who do you need to know?

*versebyverse Jun 7, 2009, 8:43:46 PM

I encourage members to do this, and I do it myself at times, but usually on my poetry account ~pamelaski

~plaguedvision Apr 7, 2009, 10:40:41 PM

Actually I have, jsut haven't gotten around to reading them. I want to actually be in the proper mind set so hopefully I can critique them in my own way. I've kept them on my watch list. Everything else has been deleted. It's good to see your back though.

~Viva-Hate Apr 8, 2009, 10:21:48 PM

And how does my back look? Probably as pasty as the rest of me...

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When you want to live:
How do you start?
Where do you go?
Who do you need to know?